It’s like a chill that creeps up through my body. My head goes numb for a second as my heart races. It races at the speed of light.
This vision. Your face.
My body tenses up but at the same time feels at rest. A contradiction. A wonderful contradiction.
I want to dance and twirl and fly. I close my eyes.
Euphoria.
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This is really good! You should try and format it into stanzas though to keep a rhythm!
ok! I shall try that 🙂 I’m really glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you for your feedback!
Anytime! Im starting writing as well so im seeing what other people have in comparison to mine!
Oh okay 🙂 I just started this site. I thought it’d be easier than writing and keeping it all in a notebook! Hey, you said I should put it in stanzas. How do you think I should organize it all?
I did the exact same! Read it to yourself and look for a beat, break it up when you feel it should! check some of mine out for an example
ok! I think I fixed it, tell me what you think!
Much better! separate euphoria though!
I thought so! but I wasn’t sure!
Well done though! Check out my stuff and share if you like it, nicely criticize if you dont 😉